tiger_acid08

Finally finished the editing of Oblivion's Escort. Not saying its perfect now but definitely better then it was before.

melanieroehrl

Ms. Tiger, 
                             Your story was simple yet concise. It had the right amount of tension between the main characters, enough angst of teenage rebellion and the grief of consequence for choices made. I am very interested in your future stories. Who knows nursing is great career of care for our fellow man but maybe a storyteller is in your future to heal the human soul.

tiger_acid08

“In the morgue freezer,” Daegan said, looking around nonplussed by the situation. Ravena could only think any normal person would be freaking out right now, but this guy is simply leaning against one of the tables watching her as another break down began to form. 
          
           Chapter 9 of Oblivion's Escort is rewritten.

tiger_acid08

“I don't let my deaths linger in agony.” He pointed out. Following her steps to talk some sense in the girl.
          
           “No, you bring them back to life and play with them until you can have them dangled by their flesh, then you let them die.”
          
           New rewritten version of Oblivion's Escort is starting to take shape. Give it a look and let me know what you think.

isabelaSlmnc

will there be a sequel for the mercenaries mate?

isabelaSlmnc

@JuaGail well I hope it's put up again.
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isabelaSlmnc

@JuaGail why was it removed?
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