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Any chance of continuing mr Devil?? 

Will you ever finish writing the book "Mr Devil " I'm really as in literary intrigued by it ,please :-)

Omg I just finish reading mr.devil and words can't even explain how amazing it was and the only that would make it better is if u update it so I can continue to enjoy your book

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@PromotingBooks sure i'll check it out when i'm not busy

Hey there! 
          I was wondering if you were interested in reading a Mystery Thriller/ Romance about spies that my friend is writing :) If you are then here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/story/2096147-unsuspected
          Sorry if I bothered you with this messages! :(

@Perseus23 sure thing !!

HI, can you return the favour and read, comment, vote on my book, The Bearded Man. Thank you :)

@MiloshPetrik Oh okay thanks!

Hello!
          
          I read the first (and only) chapter of Mr.Devil, and I have to say I see two issues with it that you need to address. 
          
          Firstly, there's the language. It appears to me that English is not your native language. That's fine, too - you have very few spelling errors, for one. You need to proofread more, root out all the grammatical errors, and odd turns of phrase. 
          
          The second issue is the formulaic plot - the pretty girl, the "average" protagonist, the bully. Does it seem very original to you? That will be more difficult to ammend. If you choose to continue this, it has to be the very best, in order to rise from among a large number of very similar stories. 
          
          Keep writing, though! No other way to get better at it.