Victoria

Any good stories you guys know with few grammar and spelling mistakes? And that's kind of realistic?

"He stared at me for a while before smirking. “So you wouldn’t mind if I went after her?”" http://wattpad.com/story/5452408?utm_content=share_passage

""Let me go!" Liam's voice cried out as he nudged into Trent. Everything seemed to go into slow motion as Trent began to stumble backwards. I even watched as his fists clenched; his index finger slipped against the trigger as a loud bang echoed throughout the whole house. Everyone began screaming from the loud noise as an invisible force shot me to the ground. I groaned as I fell to my knees and hands as my head instantly began to spin." http://wattpad.com/story/269