Hi. I saw your comment on my story, but I dont know whom you asked to take a look, whether it was me or the person you replied on the comment to. Whatever, I came across your account and I have seen your story :)
It seemes to me that you are a new user, or this account is new, which means you are a new writer. So being a new writer that you are, dont rush and take things slowly dear.
You have only yet published one chapter, which is likely to gain much attention, unless the first chapter has exclusive information about the main plot to keep the readers enthralled and in the edge of there seats, making them wait for the next chapter. But if thats not the case with your first chapter, I suggest you write a few more and wait patiently.
There are other ways to gain readers as well. Firstly, you must follow some of the accounts which are BTS stans or those who seems like they would like to read a bts x reader story.
Secondly, you could advertise, ask people to read in there message board. This method may not alwayse be fruitful, considering some people dont accept reading suggestions. But it does not hurt to try ;)
Thirdly, make reading lists. Make at least three or four, and name them apropriately like...best stories...or stories I ll alwayse love...and put a decent number of your favourite stories in them, if possible put more of bts stories. This makes the writers of these stories feel gratified and might try to look for your stories as they may stumble through your reading list.
I hope I have been helpful, for I was once like you, but I havent gone much far yet :). I still have a long way to go, and I also am sorry to say this but I may not be able to read your story. I'm not reading any stories currently, for I'm focused on writing right now.
And as much as I enjoy writing BTS x army stories, I dont fancy reading them. No ill intentions ;)
Thank you.