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Dude did you saw your 3 on fairy tail congrats
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Dude did you saw your 3 on fairy tail congrats
Hey just check out your Naruto : Marionette of suna story I gotta say wonderful job !!! It’s my favorite story so far besides your fairy tail story !!! Mind if ask any questions and bring any suggestions??
@Agito003 For your first question, yes they are. Minato and Souei are the rivals I've set up. I'm currently in a major writers block for Naruto, but I'm sure I'll get back to it again someday. Spiders is an easy answer, they're the animal I associated him way back when I first designed his character. It felt fitting. For weapons, I don't think he'll be using any. The only sort of 'tools' he'll be using is the average kunai and shuriken, as well as the four spider legs that he uses as his puppets.
Ok my first questions is Minato and Souei ever going meet up or interact again any point story ?? Also what made you choose spiders as Souei summoning animals?? Also my suggestion I think it would benefit Souei have secondary weapon on him I know he uses thread bloodline as main uses of attacking along with withs his puppets but thought he be cool he he some type of sword he could imbue or launch his strings out of like Hawkins from one piece . Those just questions and suggestions for know let know your thoughts
Hey, I left some comments on the newest chapter with ideas for Gerron's progression, i have no doubt you have your own but suggestions never hurt. Feel free to ignore everything I've said if you feel it doesn't fit in any way. Just giving a heads up so you have extra ideas in case you don't see the comments ^-^
Damn just had a wild idea: Gerron is building up his home town, once he gets the whole teleportation technology sorted out he could connect his home town to the collage of winterhold and whiterun, then make deals with both and start a magicpunk revolution (industrial revolution but using magic as fuel) and that'd have all kinds of chain reactions im not gunnaa get into but it'd help all 3 town/cities grow and become central points economically, i can see whiterun becoming a security force, winterhold acting as research and magical education whilst gerron's home town being the primary manufacturer and development hub for the advancements, also i see the companions willingly helping becuse if gerron gave them phase blades they'd loose their minds over the weapons. Could also add in both the dawngaurd and vigilants of stendar into the deal which would help against all the cosmic chaos thats happening, so they'd all be neutral parties in the civil war but are waging a war against all deadric influence and the dragons, acting as support for eachother and the dragonborn
Continuing my previous point on how easily Gerron could make a phase blade - a byproduct of that would be gerron figuring out fast travel since phase blades use teleportation to phase in and out of reality (using force fields to keep it stable so the blade never leaves its position relative to the handle) basicly telefaging anything the phase blade touches mid swing (the force field also giving the phase blade priority on the telefrag so the blade doesnt just explode instead of the target) which would leade to Gerron being able to figure out how to telepathic between relay points.
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@timotimo21 hey i wanted to ask you if oyu were to make eh OC naruto sotry can you make from the hiden leaf and make the love interested mikoto uchiha also the oc be from the senju or namikaze clan an dbe the twin brother of minato also his chakra being fire and lighting what do you think do you likje the idea also as for his summonig jutsu be what do you think of Snake or Toad and he will know the rasengan what do you think
Bro can u pls continue more of the warping hero
I actually am wondering what your going to do with natsu?
Hi I’m so sorry to ask but I was wondering if your ever going to update the mha fic I really like it I would love read to the end of it no pressure tho
@anmaielover Hey! It's all cool haha. I'm actually really considering whether to continue it or go through a rewrite since there are parts I'm not happy with.
@timotimo21 Besides Fairy Tail, what other Shounen have you read/watched?
@timotimo21 Great list! My current top five are Ezra, Gray, Laxus, Jellal, and Lucy.
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