tinabelcher_irl

Hey followers! I doubt any of your will see this, but please if it's not to much of a bother, take a look at my new story! I have really high hopes for this project and I'd love to get some feedback.

thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl By the way, how goes the whole balancing school and wattpad thing?
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thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl I LOVE HOW YOU PAIRED DARRYL AND GENE!
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tinabelcher_irl

Hey followers! I doubt any of your will see this, but please if it's not to much of a bother, take a look at my new story! I have really high hopes for this project and I'd love to get some feedback.

thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl By the way, how goes the whole balancing school and wattpad thing?
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thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl I LOVE HOW YOU PAIRED DARRYL AND GENE!
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tinabelcher_irl

I promise I'll make an update happen when I get home from school tomorrow! You guys make me more happy than I can explain! Please feel free to share the story with friends, I feel like we could do some pretty great things with a bigger audience ya feel?

tinabelcher_irl

Hey guys! First off, I just want to tell you all how much I appreciate all your positive input! I try to respond to all of you, so just thanks for that. No matter how silly you think a comment is, please always feel free to say whatever! Constructive criticism is always accepted as well.  Secondly, I just want to apologize for how long I've dragged out the same morning in the story. This may seem like a long time, but I promise that within the next three parts the story will really start rolling. So yeah! Please just keep in mind that every little comment or vote or follower, is so so very appreciated. Every time I see a new follower or comment I just get so happy, so thanks so much everyone!

tinabelcher_irl

Just updated the story! Please leave all your thoughts in the comments, make sure you tell me who you wanna hear more about (would you guys like stuff from zeke and tammy or logan and bob and lindas points of view?)

tinabelcher_irl

@thalia3558  Thank you so much! I really appreciate that.
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thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl I'd like to see what Zeke's POV would be like. P.S. I really like your writing style, keep it up!
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tinabelcher_irl

Hey just so I can figure out what exactly I wanna do with this story, how many of you are actually reading it? Is there anything you want me to do with it specifically? 

tinabelcher_irl

@thalia3558   So Sorry I just saw this! I like a lot of those ideas! I think I'll include a few of those things in here!
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thalia3558

@tinabelcher_irl Well... I think you should focus on the Louise x Logan ship for a few chapters, then you could move on to Jean. I think you should to something like... Throw in a girl, maybe a mean teacher. Or have him discover he's gay and struggle with accepting that fact. Then, at the end you could have Tammy betray Tina and steal Jimmy Jr. from her, while in the process ruining her social life, then at the end Gene, Louise and Tina band together and ruin Tammy, at some dance. Gene could get the guy/girl, Louise and Logan start officially dating (or something) and Tina gets Jimmy Jr. back. 
            
            It's just an idea and honestly it's up to you. I personally really love your story, keep it up!
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