tinnimum

Dear readers, 
          	        I would like some light criticism or to know your opinions on my story. Please note that this is my third attempt on trying to be a novice writer, so your kind inputs would help and motivate me immensely. 
          	                                                      Yours sincerely
          	                                                        Author

tinnimum

Dear readers, 
                  I would like some light criticism or to know your opinions on my story. Please note that this is my third attempt on trying to be a novice writer, so your kind inputs would help and motivate me immensely. 
                                                                Yours sincerely
                                                                  Author