tintupas97

@Shiaaa-x: i like your font how do u do that?

SilverLove

Hey there! I was wondering if you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s four that I need some criticism on: 
          
          "A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor 
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          
          "Life Inside White walls" supernatural / romance 
          At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed? 
          
          "Never Meant To Be"  romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
          Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be. 
          
          "Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural 
          Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two? 
          
          It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :) 
          
          Thank you, 
          -Silverlove

Shiaaa-x

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maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls