jikooksbigfangirl

Hello, 
          
          I am writing a new JiKook ff and would really appreciate it if you could check it out and give me your thoughts on it so far!! 
          
          https://my.w.tt/sjzLQAVM2ab

tinyhobu

@jikooksbigfangirl Of course it would go great dont worry you have everything planned so you have nothing to worry about. I hope the story goes fabulous and yeah good luck! :D 
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jikooksbigfangirl

@btskimchee i was thinking of doing that later on because there will be scenes on both sides where one of them won't be involved. For example, if you read the first one, Jungkook father wants Jimin, and during certain times, Jungkook wont be there and those parts will be in Jimins pov. On the other hand, same goes for JK and I will apply the same tactic. I just hope it ends up nice
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tinyhobu

@jikooksbigfangirl It is fine if you haven't involved Jimin or Jungkook in the first chapter but I would say you should do 1 of their point of view. And about the long chapters it would be good if you do 'Jimin pov' in the chapter and then after a few paragraphs you should switch it to 'Jungkooks pov' if you get what I mean. I am so sorry if I am waffling I'm not that experienced in writing books sorry. :(
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