tiyspamss
I hate angst like my heart can’t take it
tiyspamss
tiyspamss
give me some fanfics to read lol
tiyspamss
Happy pride month :)
tiyspamss
Bakudeku remind me of mickey and ian off of shameless. Tell me I’m wrong
tiyspamss
Happy Eid Mubarak to the people who are muslim!
(I’m muslim too haha!)
BisexualCoffeeAddict
Ph god it’s been three days and I totally forgot to critique your book I’m so sorry T-T
Do you still want the critique? Cause it’s pretty basic mostly just you should do spellchecks and grammar checks each chapter. I do feel as though you could describe the settings a bit more? Like be more descriptive while you write and focus on emotions and expanding on details. Other than that though I think your pretty good!!! I’ll critique as I read it tho since it’s easier for me to do so!
tiyspamss
But I am changing like the whole book around that’s why I unpublished it lol. I felt I was just rushing to get a chapter out then actually putting my heart into the book. It should be done in couple of days or weeks lol I haven’t started yet. But thank you so much
tiyspamss
So I unpublished my book lol.. She is under construction right now. But when I publish her again she will be way better!!
BisexualCoffeeAddict
@tiyspamss sorry I didn’t answer sooner btws I posted that at like 2:00am and then fell asleep
tiyspamss
my shitty ass book has 800 reads?! I’m so happy right now lol
tiyspamss
Omg! Happy transgender visibility day !!
tiyspamss
Slammed my finger in the window fml lol
