Ph god it’s been three days and I totally forgot to critique your book I’m so sorry T-T
Do you still want the critique? Cause it’s pretty basic mostly just you should do spellchecks and grammar checks each chapter. I do feel as though you could describe the settings a bit more? Like be more descriptive while you write and focus on emotions and expanding on details. Other than that though I think your pretty good!!! I’ll critique as I read it tho since it’s easier for me to do so!
But I am changing like the whole book around that’s why I unpublished it lol. I felt I was just rushing to get a chapter out then actually putting my heart into the book. It should be done in couple of days or weeks lol I haven’t started yet. But thank you so much