EnhiveJangkku
Hi, u told me to read one of your chapter! I have read it and I'll give you some suggestions. Tbh it's like really good and cut but I think it's to short maybe you can write like 700 to 800 words or maybe upto 1000
toastycroissant
@EnhiveJangkku Ohhh okayy, tysm because I was worried whether it was too long or too short but i just published the second chapter with 500 something words, from now on I'll try to do more, thanks for the advice!!