Hello, There needs to be space after the punctuation when you complete a sentence. The flow of the story reads better. If your browser is capable you should let the computer read the story back aloud. That option can be very helpful.
THANKYOU!!!!!Thanks to all who supported me from the start till here ,because of ur support my story has ranked #11 in #krist.And I'm getting highly motivated too .Hope you support me always!!!! Thankyou so muchhhh!!!!!
-yours lovingly
todaylover:-)
@todaylover congrats honey ♥️ u really deserved that I'm truly happy for you.. So Keep writing na~ and I missed you a lot these days .. Love you my dear twin and wishing you all the best for the coming future ♥️♥️
I have just started writing the next part of this story. Thanks for voting for every part of this story. Due to this I am getting motivation to write the next part soon :)