P.S For advice on writing I suggest you read a lot (if you already don't) and I'm talking about actual books that you can buy in a store. Classic's really enhance your descriptive skills so try reading those. Lastly, just write! No one writes magically perfect the first time. It takes time and a lot practice but it's a skill you'll eventually develop. Hope that helps :)
Hello, thank you for taking out some of your time to take a look at my story, but I'm still a bit confused by your comment... When you said I should write more books, were you referring to normal teen fiction or variety of 1D fanfics's?