lgustaf72
Happy Belated Birthday!
tomorrowwriterr
tomorrowwriterr
birthday was just yesterday so I haven’t had time to revise the next chapter but I’ll try and get it out tonight!
tomorrowwriterr
Posted on TikTok make sure to go check that out!
31darkromance
last chapter was vey wholesome, quick question tho. why is there barely any dialogue between milena and viviana? like i notice you will have them talking barely and then say they’re in a comfortable silence more than they actually talk.
tomorrowwriterr
I recently started to write because I like not really knowing if I was good at it so there things that I don’t know how to do well and this is one. I make them sit quietly a lot cause I don’t really know how to come across a conversation without it being too much or too little. I’m sorry for this but I’ll take this into consideration when I write my next books. Thank you for bringing it up!
tomorrowwriterr
double chapter post tomorrow…WHO SAID THAT
tomorrowwriterr
@31darkromance They were finished but I decided to make them into one cause they were pretty short and I’m currently revising the last one
lovangelj
when tear me down is done, you should rewrite the whole book but in viviana’s pov
tomorrowwriterr
that’d be nice but it would delay the next story coming out and I think you guys would enjoy that one a lot more
tomorrowwriterr
chapter will be delayed…I may have broken my laptop and can’t access my doc with the chapter BUT BUT I promise it’s worth the wait
lovangelj
you just leaving us on a cliffhanger is crazy
tomorrowwriterr
IM SORRY I have to…I’ve been too nice with trying not to leave yall on cliffhangers. However chapter may be posted tomorrow
qwrhhg
new chapter?
tomorrowwriterr
Should I post a TikTok spoiling a little on what the next book is about?