Hey girl! I like the book so far. Your writing is really good. If you are writing from a computer, I suggest that you paste the chapter onto Grammarly.com (make an account, it's free and will help you not only with this but school work too) first so it can help you make corrections and fix any grammar issues and spelling mistakes. Not that I saw a lot but it could help make the chapters better. I also want you to make sure that you put the actual words that a character says in quotation marks so that the reader understands that the person is speaking. I enjoy it and I want you to edit these chapters and repost them. I'm so happy that you are writing. It's one of my passions and if you ever need help with a book then let me know ❤️
