ok full story in a mostly final rough draft version. Please comment. I already have a few known issues I guess we will call them. Arrangement of the second chapter needs to be rearranged for flow I think; Same with third chapter; I used with the probably incorrect help of a translate website foreign languages with translation footnote which seemed like a good idea but gets tedious when reading, let me know your opinions on if i should just put in the english version instead. Also you will notice some seemingly chapter titles of character names , they were basically a placeholder for my thoughts and will probably be edited out since there is not consistency with them throughout. Thanks and have a good day and be easy with my fragile male ego please.:}
