toriholli

I updated the description on "Losing Sight Of You" to give you guys a clearer insight into the book!!

YasmineAsfalou

Thx for the follow back !
          Love <33
          
          ~Yasmine

toriholli

you’re so welcome!!
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decaffeinatxd

Hi!
          Thanks for the follow, hope you check out The Downsides Of Dying too!
          Have a great day/night ✨

toriholli

youre welcome!! i definitely will, it looks great!
            
            if you’re up to it, my book “Losing Sight of You” is now in progress and i’d love it if you’d take a look and give me your opinion! <3
            
            xoxo
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toriholli

CHAPTER 2 OF LOSING SIGHT OF YOU IS UP! 
          
          i think we can all agree that these last several months have been a little hectic. at least for me they have. but that’s besides the point!! i’ve conquered my long overdue writers block and have started on my book again! i used to have trouble seeing where my book was going to go but i think i now have a pretty good idea on how i’m going to write it :) i see some more frequent updates in the near future so keep a look out! xoxo

toriholli

!!!!IMPORTANT!!!!
          
          omg seriously cannot believe it’s been months since i’ve been even remotely active on this app.
          
          however, i been having a deep thirst for writing again as i find myself picking up an old habit of reading books religiously! some recently being wattpad stories which have inspired me a lot toward to the future of my own book.
          
          i absolutely love the plot of my book, but sometimes i question my characters and how i’m going to end it. it was an idea that popped into my head and i immediately put it onto paper without thinking what would happen to the book in the long run.
          
          i know i haven’t updated the book in FOREVER but i need you to trust me.
          
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          i will be putting unpublishing my book for an indefinite amount of time while i 
          
          1. fix the plot a bit to make it more “spicy” if you know what i mean
          2. im going to leave most of the chapters the same, maybe change a bit here and there i’m not sure, but i’ve noticed a change in my writing style since i’ve started the book and i want to display that style throughout the chapters i’ve already written. (and fix some grammatical errors)
          3.i’m going to change my main characters name from my own because i feels weird to me. i have no idea why i did it in the first place.
          
          
          please give me your thoughts and ideas, it would be greatly appreciated

toriholli

@TheAwesomeAliyah aww ty <3 i’m excited to start writing it again!!
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AuthorAliyah

@toriholli I think you should do it how you think is best because you’re the author but I’m excited to read it again!
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