tosprayloveonherface

Hi I just updated my story as I said to u last time. Chapters 2 and 3. Thanks!

How do I fix my format???

http://www.wattpad.com/story/3461074-it%27s-started-with-a-nightmare could you please read my story

@tosprayloveonherface ey! Thanks for fanning. Can't believe an amature fanned me. :)

Yours are fantastic, seriously. I was reading them and like "Why the heck aren't mine this good?" Haha, I think other people will realize and improve theirs as well after they read yours. 
          
          Hey, do you have any tips to get more fans/reads? I've been on this site a while and gave up quickly after I started. I'm back now, and I know that 10,000 reads don't happen over night, I just don't know if I'm game for advertising 24/7. It makes me feel like I'm shoving my story down peoples throats (Not Cool!) 

@tosprayloveonherface I'm glad I could help. I didn't really intend for the first sentence to be this great thing, but after I created the thread I guess I though why not see if you're supposed to make sure you hook your audience. And yours definitely did hook the audience. :) 

@chershirecat No problem, thanks for the comments. I never really paid attention to the first sentence, to be honest. I really just post and end at random points, but now I'll pay more attention to it. I saw how effective it is when you put some thought into it (like yours) Thanks for the tip (:

Thanks for fanning : ) and really happy you liked my work 

@thegyth Thanks for the fan! & I actually saw it a couple years back poking some fun at the 'to write love on her arms'. I thought it was funny, unlike most. Guess it's my crude sense of humor!
          
          I'll definitely put your works in my library and read them when I get a chance. Definitely will let you know my opinions!
          
          Have a good one!
          
          K

Happy Fan Day Friday!! I have to love the grotesque image of your screen name. Ha! Unique.
          
          I've fanned back, anyway, as per the rules of the day, and it's a pleasure to meet you. I see you're also a fantasy writer. That is good good good! Something else to read next week when I've finally finished frantic editing! Huzzah!
          
          If you're reading The Fragile Tower or The Butterfly Catchers, I'd love to hear your thoughts (and naturally votes make my day, but no pressure... ;) plus watch out for news on the new competition coming soon.
          
          Gytha
          
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