Hey everyone! Can you guys please check out my story Halley's Comet? It's been out for a couple months now and has gotten zero views. There's only been two chapters so far and I need some constructive criticism in order to continue. Thanks!
Oh ye' know the song 'piano man' by Billy Joel as well!So do I
"Sing us a song,
You're the piano man,
Sing us a song tonight,
When were all in the mood for a melody,
You got us,
Feeling alright"
Hey everyone! Can you guys please check out my story Halley's Comet? It's been out for a couple months now and has gotten zero views. There's only been two chapters so far and I need some constructive criticism in order to continue. Thanks!