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Hey, your definition of love I'd amazing and your story can become much better, so I have a suggestion : 
          Make the chapters longer and keep the author's note short (unless you're a humour writer like me), add cliffhangers but don't reveal too much or too less (either of those could be devastating). 
          If you want, I can help edit your story, but just make sure you minimize the grammatical and other mistakes as much as possible :)

Hello! Just thought I'd stop by and ask if you could check out my book ' Partnered Up' it would mean a lot to me, but if not I understand