Hey! I like where ur anon fanfic is going so far but can I please give some constructive criticism? No hate ❤️ I don’t understand how in some of the sentences you add the word “would” yk? Like instead of “I dust my backpack” it’s “I would dust my backpack” idk maybe it makes sense and I’m being dumb LOL but overall LOVING IT SO FAR KEEP GOING
Hey!! i have a fanfic about the spec ops guy! Its just the first chapter but i really need some ideas! wanna check it out? l need your opinions to it!!