tragicbb

the fanfics on my thing r trash I can write better now 

nimmiex

Hey! I like where ur anon fanfic is going so far but can I please give some constructive criticism? No hate ❤️ I don’t understand how in some of the sentences you add the word “would” yk? Like instead of “I dust my backpack” it’s “I would dust my backpack” idk maybe it makes sense and I’m being dumb LOL but overall LOVING IT SO FAR KEEP GOING

tragicbb

@n1mn0m  and I'm glad you like it omg :o
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tragicbb

@n1mn0m THANKS LOL idk I keep changing pasts and present
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