Hey can you and Isabella let me know, via DM if I make any grammar mistakes, as I update my story? I'm going through and fixing all the missing chapters, grammar and spelling mistakes, and so on. Also let me know if anything doesn't line up. I'm also fixing the small meadow/leaf fur thing, but I'm pretty sure it wasn't the name, it was a missing chapter. I need you to be my critics. Sometimes I can't see things because it all makes sense in my head, because I already wrote the story, and I know it inside and out. Thnx bye