we_are_broken_01
Okay Trin, I love your story, it's just, try adding more depression and emotion. Think of the worst thing that could happen to someone and write all the detail. Look, say something sad like, I remember fighting my emotions that day. I even tried look evil in the face, but evil looked right back. See Trin, emotional! Or say like, If your going through hell, keep going. EMOTIONAL WOMAN!!! GET IN TOUCH 28TH YOUR INNER EMOTIONS! Love you still tho!!
