tropicalcinnamon05

hey guys, i haven’t been on here in a long while and i’ve been thinking about my book and what i should do with it. i don’t want to cut it off suddenly but i don’t have much motivation to write it anymore :( so instead i wanted to ask y’all what improvements i should make with it? like what would make the story better? and what do y’all want to happen next? also i still have to correct the information on it since nct dream has changed since i last wrote this  also i understand that the book isn’t the best either- tbh i was actually 11 when i first started writing it but now i’m 14 so i’m still quite young and can’t write too good. i’d appreciate any feedback whether it be compliments or constructive criticism. thank you guys! 

tropicalcinnamon05

hey guys, i haven’t been on here in a long while and i’ve been thinking about my book and what i should do with it. i don’t want to cut it off suddenly but i don’t have much motivation to write it anymore :( so instead i wanted to ask y’all what improvements i should make with it? like what would make the story better? and what do y’all want to happen next? also i still have to correct the information on it since nct dream has changed since i last wrote this  also i understand that the book isn’t the best either- tbh i was actually 11 when i first started writing it but now i’m 14 so i’m still quite young and can’t write too good. i’d appreciate any feedback whether it be compliments or constructive criticism. thank you guys!