miadesir
I loveee" beneath your skin" Soo much,u have a great writing style an even better mindset and u said dat ur a new writer ,U're amazing. If you can write another bl story I'll love it. Muah ur de best darlin
truedesiree
Apayne5
your book “beneath your skin” is the most disgusting book i have ever read. you wrote the character ryder horribly. he is a psychopathic maniac who deserves nothing in life. and u contrasted that with a pushover super sweet guy who deserves everything. and u made them get together and made blake forgive him. that is genuinely insane. and i know this is just a book and its fiction but i worry about you as a person if u think someone like ryder is redeemable. what he did was awful. and his family too. i genuinely couldnt even finish the book because it was so disgusting. ppl in ur comments every chapter criticizing you should wake u up to how horrible u are in writing this book. it is terrible for so many reasons. they should never end up together and ryder deserves nothing. anyone can see that but instead you wrote blake to be dumb and a doormat. i hope you understand how disgusting the behavior in this book is and nobody like ryder deserves anything in life. i think you should honestly think about this book and why so many ppl find it disgusting bc it really truly is.
miadesir
@Apayne5 first of all I don't think anyone was criticizing her, secondly if you had cared to read de book to de end u would have at least understood what her thoughts were. Ppl like u are not very Open minded but she had explained what she wanted to portray and ppl definitely understood. We need more ppl like her cause like she said later on blake saw de good in Ryder and after everything Ryder had a character development. An advice for you nextime ur reading a novel, read with an open mind, and at least read to de end u don't just go around saying nonsense when u haven't even finished de book . And btw we need more ppl like de author in dis world. I love her work and moreso I love way she sees things. Oh and de book is not disgusting and I think dat she's doing a very good job
yong_heelover
I can't lie author I originally didn't want to read the book "Beneath Your Skin" because of how many chapters it has. But then I started reading the book and now? I'm hooked. Absolutely and utterly hooked. It's gotten to the point that when I tell myself I need to stop reading this book so I can take a break, I feel like a drug addict going through withdrawal symptoms. That's how good this book is. I'm literally bouncing my leg and clawing at my throat. That's how good this book is. This book has me in a chokehold. I'm obsessed. Completely obsessed. It's too good! It's too good! You put drugs in this book. You must have. Never have I ever been so enamored and obsessed with a book before.
truedesiree
Hahah omg thank you so much! That’s amazing, and honestly over the years my patience was thinning reading long descriptions and not a lot of things happening, plus I kinda lost my attention span from scrolling, so that’s why I decided to write a book that I would love to read, that has so much action and tension that once I start I would be hooked till the end. I gotta be careful because I still find myself clicking on a chapter that someone liked and before realizing I’m reading the next chapters as well lol… some people complain that too much is happening it’s making their head spin but for some like you it’s just a wild rollercoaster
rose2q4e
Gentle Reader, How about giving my first creation a moment to read. I will be happy and grateful for your feedback and suggestions. Thank you https://www.wattpad.com/story/377116417?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=rose2q4e
ruakredniwluk
Hey author, your story 'beneath your skin' is very amazing book . Your book had me in a chokehold and I was not trying to escape. When r u goona write new book???
truedesiree
@ruakredniwluk thank you, unfortunately I don’t have plans on writing another BL story , all my ideas are for bxg. Bur beneath your skin remains here whenever you miss it:)
ruakredniwluk
@truedesiree I’m more into BL , but best of luck for your girl×boy book and I 'm sure it will be nice.
MoonlightWritxs
Heyyy, thank you so much for reading and voting my story❤️❤️ That's truly very sweet of youu✨✨
truedesiree
Thanks for all the follows and appreciation i hope you have the best holidays ever, I took some time off writing to be in the moment, spend some time with my family but gosh I’ve got writing fever now, is that even a word? Lol but anyway I miss it so much, I gotta get back into it. Wish me luck
ruby_ribbon
Hi, sorry to disturb. I'm just learning to write stories. please help read and comment
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LLBOOKSLTD
Hey hope it’s ok to promote my book on your page totally fine it’s it’s not since this is me formally asking. Also a new author here wouldn’t mind getting to know other authors. Happy reading/writting.
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