tslrstories

Hey, regarding my Story about Lana and Jen, I just wanted to let you all know that I merged some chapters, which is why there are now only 11. When I started writing this fanfiction, I really had no clue what I was doing, and it bothered me that some chapters didn't have many words. I'm sorry if this deleted some comments from you , but now the chapters are going to be longer. I hope I'm forgiven? 
          	
          	Much love to you ♥️
          	PS.: The new chapter is mixed with the last one, so there is a new chapter inside chapter 11, after the part you already know :)

Misty4Mark

I just finished the story again, and wasn't there a continuing story about their future, meeting Jen's Mom, who after meeting her and seeing how great their lives are being together,  accepts them, and their both proposing, well Jen did, and Lana laughs saying that she was going to propose later that night,  and then they had a marriage,  and then I believe Jen got raped and became pregnant, with Henry, and I had like a pair of twins, but it's been awhile since I've read these stories, but I thought this story HAD a second story?? See, I just can't stop reading this.....
          Thank you for writing this, 
          
               @Misty4Mark 

Misty4Mark

I've been with you from the start of this story, and as @Misty2Dorothea,  I edited the story and I'm SO happy you took my help on the story, besides swearing, but it's normal for you, cause I know authors write how they speak, so I'm guessing you uselot of F words!!! BUT I just finished 34, and honey you need to get her SO comfortable in their relationship to get her to admit OUT loud that she's Gay, and  walk around kissing and hugging Lana, and wants to introduce her to her parents, and getting Emma and Regina to kiss, surprise Mom n Dad, but ok whose story is this?? ☺️ Sorry, but I just don't want it to end here, there's so many stories that haven't been wrapped up,  SO I really hope that your not finished with this story and your in the middle of writing the next chapter!!!

Misty4Mark

Yes this IS your story, and I'm just spewing my thoughts on what you could write about!? And I hope I just added to WHAT you want to write about! I've actually been stuck on SQ stories from the VERY biggining when they were just stories, before the show!! So I've always got ideas for their story!! 

Misty4Mark

I just finished the12th, last chapter that you posted, and of course it's leaving me wanting more!! The only kiss they've shared wasn't even a kiss, it did however bring them back into each others lives!! I seriously think areal kiss will enlighten their true feelings, and the master she can get rid of her 'fiance' (prick) Marcus! I think you should write him leaving marks, which Lana sees and moves Jen in with het.....
          

tslrstories

@Misty4Mark Aww I am so happy that you can't wait for the next chapter! thank you so much for your suggestion, we'll see what's gonna happen in the future :) and thank you for reading <3
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tslrstories

Hey, regarding my Story about Lana and Jen, I just wanted to let you all know that I merged some chapters, which is why there are now only 11. When I started writing this fanfiction, I really had no clue what I was doing, and it bothered me that some chapters didn't have many words. I'm sorry if this deleted some comments from you , but now the chapters are going to be longer. I hope I'm forgiven? 
          
          Much love to you ♥️
          PS.: The new chapter is mixed with the last one, so there is a new chapter inside chapter 11, after the part you already know :)