tsukiyuma

I'm gonna update toxic when I am done with exams

flatteringbutterfly

I read it and.....I LOVED IT.  it had a plot and gave drama it was realistic and it gave a lot enough info so you can follow it easily

tsukiyuma

thank you^^
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flatteringbutterfly

Ok um I don't mean to be rude but I really didn't like that story mean it was good sure and it gave enough info and there was a lot of drama and all but I really  didn't like how levi was written I mean sure it said he was strouge but I find him out of character the levi I know would bet that guy in seconds and would tell I don't know it just felt that he was out of character and i really didn't know where it was suppose to go I mean will eren never know about it or something I find it confusing but it's all up to you if you want to continue sorry if I hurted you

tsukiyuma

@flatteringbutterfly nah. I really am not satisfied on how the story went either, it went hell xD so that's why I decided to cut it off. and no you're not being rude. I love criticism. and I appreciate your feedback. all though I have a tons of idea in mind but I'm just done. xD
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