first edited chapter posted!!! i know where i'm taking the plot, but unfort the rest of the writing will have to be after college apps are done, so expect regular and frequent updates after january 10 when i'll have zero responsibilities in my life. (i hate the american college application system. why do i have half a year of hell and half a year of doing nothing???) i'll still be here periodically to see what's up with everyone and live react to races tho!