Mockingbird

hi, would you mind checking out my story. Maybe critic it a bit and suggest ways to improve it? Sorry I sound so demanding. hahaha. but i'd really appreciate it if you do.
          
           is about a young rich boy who fights his attraction towards a bratty mean girl.
          
          Also, you could suggest some of your stories to me in exchange.
          
          thanks!!
           https://my.w.tt/UiNb/UbMscjHNLH

GARY MOTHERFUCKING OAK. 

Also, I'm changing the plot of "What Are The Odds", but keeping the title.

I'm unblushing all my books at the moment and wont re-publish them until I've finished them. But, don't worry I'll still write more books, even after I've finished all the ones I had before.

I'm putting all my books on hold to write two other books. I want to finish them, revise and edit them, and then publish both of 'em on here.

Hey!! Saw your comment on a book and I looked at your profile!
           I'm gonna read some of your home

Check out my fanfic