❤️A heart for you. I understand what you are going through with the whole ya know thingy that everyone loves. I made this account so I can focus on more of the lore of my books and not get pressured to update.
hey, just checking in, you doing better? idk about you but school just started for me, if it did for you too, I just want to make sure you're doing okay :| <3
@tw1stedcalam1ty hey, thats great. It’s totally chill if your feels fluctuate. Write what you want. And good luck in softball, sounds fun, i hope you make the team!
Hi! Yes, school has started for me. I still don’t know if I’m gonna continue my smut book. It just makes me feel icky and weird when I write in it. I’m also playing softball very often because I wanna make the school team. But overall, I’m doing alright. Thanks for checking in!
hey!! i love your stories so so much that i decided to follow you!! i also saw a bit of how your are and i just wanted to ask if there is anyway possible that we could be friends? i would love it if we do!’ - lei
I think it’s a good first chapter. But I think you should stretch it out more. Write more about the characters. Give more information about the events leading up to the actual smut. You can maybe even make the characters more likable and memorable. But like I said, it was a pretty good first chapter. I’m excited to see what other chapters you write. ❤️
(Sorry for responding so late)