tweetieeee

To anyone who sees this, I am starting to write a book and I want a little feedback. It's only one chapter so far. I'm open to all critics and I will rewrite the story or write a second chapter if you aren't really into it. The first chapter is simply a flashback it's not going to be all about that. That just marks the start on the road Taraji is about to go through. Please help me out. Thank you. 

tweetieeee

To anyone who sees this, I am starting to write a book and I want a little feedback. It's only one chapter so far. I'm open to all critics and I will rewrite the story or write a second chapter if you aren't really into it. The first chapter is simply a flashback it's not going to be all about that. That just marks the start on the road Taraji is about to go through. Please help me out. Thank you.