@twilight23-moon
Hey,
I started reading your story Not Same Anymore.
And I really liked the plot which made me leave this message here. While the plot is good, the grammar and writing has a lot of scope for improvement.
So, if you would like I can proof read and edit your story.
If you think I am being rude or getting ahead of myself please ignore this message and apologies if I offended you.
Iam a silent reader but I came here to tell that I love to read ur stories alot
@Janu1207 Aww really❤️Girl u made my dayyyyy❤️I'm glad that u r enjoying my storiesss.... Lots of love❤️
Guys!!!!Important!!!
I have lost my count how much time I apologizes for it... But still.... I'm so sorry because for the oneshot.... I know I clearly know I crossed the limit and shouldn't have done that.... I accepted my mistake... Now please don't make a fuss about it again and again....!!!Don't create an account just to blame or hate me....!!Just like every human I too make mistakes.... And this time it's too much....And I'm regretting it in a bad way
Criticisms are allowed and will accept it too... But if I did something or said something back that does means one thing u did something wrong too!!
Again... Sorry all... Sorry for hurting ur feelings!!!Will be more careful from now on pakka!!!Please this time forgive this stupid Author of yours❤️
@wassupupasna U didn't read it.... I think.... But I'm glad that u don't lol♀️♀️♀️it became problamtic...
Gukiiiiiii❤️
"I want to be the young chess champion "-He did that.... I'm so emotional❤️A late gift for Vishy sir.....
It's through Prag I love chess and is still considering him as the fav❤️Gukesh is no less..... ❤️As an Indian it's a proud moment for us❤️
@riyanXrutu Haha true.... It's hard to believe gukesh is younger than him.... I mean look at them vidit seems to be younger and him getting married that news I was like really ...
@twilight23-moon Vidit is really a pure heart. Such a sweetie❤️. But, no more rishtas because he is going to marry✨❤️
Goddd!!!!!Nothing seems good from yesterday and I have been started to make blunders tooo♀️♀️♀️Didn't read a message from the reader and I said something that make me look like a fool♀️♀️But what the problem is it look like the answer♀️♀️♀️I just don't know what's exactly happening to meeeeeeeeeeeee
@twilight23-moon if you are writing on a public platform and have written so much then I shouldn't have to tell you. isn't that issue? you should be careful yourself
@abhirati10 Will dooo... And thanks a lot for a criticism with open mind than making it a big stuff... Thankyou for adressing it to me openly.... I appreciate ur efforts ❤️
Hai yaar think u have updated os but it's not loading please do check
@silent-kudi Girl that ended as a disaster lol!! I do found it odd too that's why I deleted it.... Not good at all... Will write some another❤️
@hetu_07 Hopefully we will come back ❤️
@riyanXrutu No idea... What's all happening isn't goodddd
@riyanXrutu Don't really know... What's happening with them but it's not at all good... Rishu, reddy, and ashwin are now the hopessssss....
Rohit yaaar......!!!!
Kinda disappointed.... With all the seniors....♀️♀️
I aghhh... Leave it...
Still some hopes left♀️♀️let's seee
@riyanXrutu @twilight23-moon Same question.....but i think they are giving the chance to young players... don't know....but i think jadeja should be there in 11
@twilight23-moon hopes they will lead India to win. Finger Crossed. But I have a question... WHY ISN'T RAVINDRA JADEJA THERE IN THE PLAYING 11...?????