Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s two that I need some criticism on:
Life Inside White walls: supernatural / romance
At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed?
Red Ribbons and Scarlet Fangs: fantasy/romance/ supernatural
A hunter and noble, Bethany vowed she never love a vampire. Yet, with war in the air and her kingdom being threaten, she is sent off to wed to the vampire prince. Trying to runaway, she seeks comfort with her childhood friend Felix. The only problem though is that fact that Felix has a little secret…and she might not like it…
It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :)
Thank you,
-Silverlove