twisted_cacti44

Hi guys! Just wanted to remind you all I've decided to edit some of the chapters from my story. Also a re-post of the updated chapter for Metropolis' Megalomaniac!

NexusCrow-X

@cacti_rule84 XD read it again and it's hilarious! 
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twisted_cacti44

@omegacrow-nexus thanks!
          	  Devin was in the school theatre, taking some paint with him to put a new layer of paint on his skates. While doing so, he overheard two people arguing, that being Zee and Oliver.
          	  
          	  Oliver: Oh, how cliche of you to use the same joke again! I do not have bad acne! It's simply small cleaning won't fix.
          	  
          	  Zee: Oh, really? Then I should know a thing or two about fixing, like your voice! You may think you sound sophisticated, but you sound overly dramatic...
          	  
          	  Oliver: *gasps* I am not!
          	  
          	  Zee: Like someone in Disney movie!
          	  
          	  Oliver: Oh really? Well, I'll have you know that I was close to being on one! And unlike you, I don't need preschool magic, I had an angelic voice. Ta-ta.
          	  
          	  Oliver smugly walks away while Zee was seething.
          	  
          	  Zee: "AnGeLiC vOiCe"! I'll show you...
          	  
          	  Zee then spots Devin sneaking away while holding a paint canister.
          	  
          	  Zee: Yooouuu heard all of that, didn't you?
          	  
          	  Devin: Well, only the part that started with the acne. I just only came her for paint, but I think I could help you...
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          	  During a school play, hosted by Oliver, Zee and Devin snuck behind the curtains and switched out the original music Oliver would sing with a song of their choice.
          	  
          	  Zee: This might actually work! He's coming!
          	  
          	  Zee and Devin sneak into the audience as Oliver was about to sing.
          	  
          	  Oliver: *whispers* Play the Titanic.
          	  
          	  Barry would play the music, only for the song Oliver requested turned out to be A Thousand Miles.
          	  
          	  Oliver: *whispers* That's not the song! Switch it out!
          	  
          	  Barry: *whispers* This is the only one here!
          	  
          	  Oliver: *to the audience* Uh-Uhm, oh Rose!
          	  
          	  Babs, who was playing Rose, was jamming to the song.
          	  
          	  Babs: *singing* And now I wonder! If I could fall into the sky! Do you think time would pass me-
          	  
          	  Oliver: Babs!
          	  
          	  The audience began laughing while Devin and Zee both nodded their heads.
          	  
          	  Oliver: THIS NOT PART OF THE ACT!!
          	  
          	  Babs: I'm adding this to me playlist.
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NexusCrow-X

Hey hru today?
          
          I updated a second DC superhero girls villain story crossover with Spider-Man! Check it out when you get a chance and let me know what you think of it, have a great day! 

twisted_cacti44

@NexusCrow-X Hi there. No problem, it's all good.
            
            And thanks! He'll make his first appearance in Alien Force.
            
            And as for the girls, I agree with your choice. So yeah, it's definitely gonna be Charmcaster, Ester, and Attea.
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NexusCrow-X

@twisted_cacti44 Hey, sorry for the late reply. 
            
            The OCS aren't bad. The OC based on Robotnik should be a good choice. 
            
            As for the pairings of three, if I have to choose; Hmmmm... Perhaps Charmcaster, Ester & Attea? 
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TheOmniBreed

Are you gonna redo the hazbin hotel fic?

twisted_cacti44

@TheOmniBreed To answer your question, yes, I am.
            
            I didn't feel too happy about how it looked and how the plot was going. So I'm redoing it as of now with some of my other stories.
            
            Now, the love interests might have more, and I'm trying to make the plot of the story a bit more comedic yet also serious in a way. And the character is getting a name changed along with new villains.
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NexusCrow-X

Hey, how's it going?

diesel_WorkZ_2

@twisted_cacti44 imagine Devin possessing a fanny pack that can store infinite about of stuff (weapons, tools, snacks etc) 
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Yi_Lily39

Today or tomorrow ZAMination Minecraft male reader Wattpad

twisted_cacti44

@Yi_Lily39 I am not done yet. Please be patient
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Yi_Lily39

Your done ZAMination Minecraft male reader
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diesel_WorkZ_2

Imagine Lance and the Chaotic Order heading towards the school only to be stopped 
          
          Lance: A lex Corp toll booth!? Goddammit lex! <to the order> anyone got a coin?! 
          
          Chaotic order: <muttering among themselves> 
          
          Lance: Dammit! We'll have to go back and get a shitload of coins! 

diesel_WorkZ_2

@twisted_cacti44 devin: I don't do autographs! How about a backstage Pass kicking instead! 
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twisted_cacti44

@diesel_WorkZ_2 Devin would grow three sizes before grabbing a mic.
            
            Devin: *singing* RELEASE THE BEAST! What's my name? Super Macho Man! Who's gonna win the game? Super Macho Man!
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NexusCrow-X

Here's another dialogue ideas for your dcshg henchmen story!
          
          1. Ra's Al Ghul sees potential in Devin during his henchmen for hire work and seeks to recruit him into his league of shadows through series of tests until finally brainwashing into a deadly assassin. The supervillain girls hear of his dark deeds and try to reach their boyfriend while having to hesitantly fight him, can they break the spell or will their beloved be lost in Ra's darkness? (A 2 parter dialogue)
          
          2. Tatsu helps Devin hone his skills after seeing him get into a ruckus with some stronger thugs who were able to overwhelm him. Adding more different fighting styles to his existing ones, Devin hunts down the thugs not just for revenge but more importantly, they stole the specially crafted jeweled amulets he got for his girlfriends. 
          
          3. Casey Krinsky is at it again to claim Devin as her boyfriend, this time she learned to improve her powers and to her eye color as she decided to switch bodies with Carol, who was devastated as this time, their eye color is switched as well. A New drawback to Casey's improved power is that she's becoming more like Carol & Carol's becoming more like Casey with each second, as the violet lantern did not want to lose herself and all she is or Devin? Can she convince everyone & get her body back or will she be erased and become the new Casey Krinsky while Casey becomes the new Carol Ferris & Devin's permanent lover? 
          
          4. While conducting an experiment in fusion power attributes for an effective combination, an accident occurred in Devin's work, causing an explosion with results in Harleen & Doris fused into one body. Now known as Dorleen Quinzuel temporarily until Devin can fix then, the fused villainess shows off her combined might & mischief to the superhero girls in the form of Giganta Quinn. 

NexusCrow-X

@twisted_cacti44 Neat. 
            
            And that's awesome. I'm doing good myself. 
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twisted_cacti44

@NexusCrow-X NP. And I've been good. Plan on watching the Sonic 3 movie. How about you?
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NexusCrow-X

@twisted_cacti44 Thanks again and also, Hru? 
            
            Also, there's still 3 dialogues here but no rush though. Take your time. 
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