uber bliss

Chapter 14 was amazing and ur right about extremely right about 
           bullying

No problem I kno it will be great 

@demiballin thank you sooo much!!!! I will really take your advice!!! to be honst I don't even know why I mad percy kiss rick I think I was messing up with all the names because that is not what I wanted to do. I'm going to start over with chapter and trying to make it really exciting!!! thank you for the advice

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please do not delete the fan fic it perfect okay I admit I liked wat u did at first with chapter 13 but wen they started jus kissing each other I just didn't agree I feel like if u have a girlfriend thts not a real relationship if she starts kissing girls or boys because  of a party game and wen PERCY kissed rick thts disgusting u might have messed up there but don't give up in the story it's to good maybe u should try every thing again but change a few stuff fat the party like instead of truth or dare they try to play a prank on annabeth and her friends while percy and Jason try to stop them and the party becomes a huge argument and fight wen they say we only invited u to play this huge prank and u get the idea but my point is it's a great story don't delete jus try again       And ps sorry it's a really long comment