the_grapejuice_blues

Hey
          It'd mean a lot if you'd check out my friend's book "Hellspawn" it's related to gang and mafia stuff 
          Sorry and thank you 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/277392557?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=sweetcreatureinhell&wp_originator=G7j556ygeC2m76L5uJDn6bgdtcf8drwEol1O%2FlnlY8ftXKdRQ4%2BviHufRDZ7d1aTUyje5Mkvg5Plm3cjkh7wd5XiidO3qMcVFY2Lp03okocZALn7zFHnspycS4QVbKkw

butterflywings2004

Hello, I hope you're fine. I am so sorry for plugging but I would really appreciate it if you could spare some time to check out my new book. Thanks alot.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/263018037?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=butterflywings2004&wp_originator=lGBHMWoVwlTIa0IXJ8F%2FBQ%2BKbD6PL0wDEgJaUYGTLof9%2BV6GmmfUX78poAYQJBLD2bpnl%2FT5X%2F%2FKgTuIitzOdzi21QS5Txg3Jv2fQAAAH%2FUZtpmCg6IyKUVyI3%2BXVkpm

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uiamechan

Hello, 
            
            No problem , it’s okay , about your book , I only have a few words to describe it :
            
            1. BEAUTIFUL details , it was so nice seeing those  tiny details , it was neat , I did not find any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes, and it was beautifully written I could tell that you spend time on your work and that you actually care about it . 
            
            2. YOUR CHARACTER’S are ✨everything ✨ I loved The main character Ava , she has and shows her emotions and she is a very strong girl who is learning how to cope with the death of her parents and how she must live on .  Noah seems like a person that hides his emotions, I love how you portrayed him in your book as a protective brother , Sophia seems like the person that would give their life for you  and she acts like a true friend , so you made your characters more human and no human is perfect so I high-five you for that ….
            
            3. The plot is amazing , it does not make you bored quickly and it makes you continue reading and not stop until you finish so I’m waiting for the next chapters. 
            
            My opinion: 
            
            It was a great book and I enjoyed reading it , i hope you take care of yourself and I hope you know that you are doing a great job  and don’t over work yourself
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