justingame44
Hello I read your story and it is pretty great I was wondering. Can you please read mine as I'm trying to get more feedback on each chapter as I've been fixing up grammar mistakes and wanting to become a great author.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/197334449?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=justingame44&wp_originator=tNSruVCsR87%2FtphufiFG%2FWe%2BSnsjTXnG4bhW6XjXeH7hn3%2FtHk5F2%2BAcLMJTwCwsj%2FObbMOkUFCKLKhqiOFeTN97hB7ShjHZtkuHz%2ByTrqd6X%2BTso5yiTqWx2tY%2BXB89
umbreonshadow
@justingame44 thank you! sorry for the late reply, i just got back from a hiatus for school. i definitely check out your story :)