una_whitelillies

@adultfictionstories I think the whole idea of being in a book club is for the members to exchange suggestions of how to make one's work better. Please add your requirement of submitting edited revised stories as essential for applying for the book club itself in your @adultfictionstories book club pages/book instead of my message board. It would be more useful for the other authors. Thank you, 
            Yours sincerely

@una_whitelillies Sure, we considered your story would benefit from line editing, before being considered for the Club. We found quite a few errors in the first few chapters. 
            
            Sincerely,
            # AFBC

@adultfictionstories Ok. Just to be clear, I didn't apply randomly and had gone through the laid out requirements as mentioned in your pages/book.  
            Kindly specify it more clearly and in detail of what qualifies your fulfillments in your requirements for the future and for the other authors so as to avoid the same.Thank you. 

I hope you update and complete this story! You’re excellent at story telling! And I love the combination of Ava’s story with her residency experience.
            
            Also, not sure if you are aware that we can only read up to chapter 53, even though the description says there are 56 chapters.

@Thatdreamblog Heyy Im so happy to hear from you! Really this story holds a vry dear place in my heart…The way you have put the emotions…its incredible! Ur just awesome! Surely I believe one day you will finish this story with a great ending…you know I was having so many questions after reading the last chapter of "Pace my heart" My heart was full of excitement and so many mixed emotions as to what will happen next…I also saw that its been nearly five years since you have written…but deep down I knew that you would'nt leave it just like that…As far as I knew, a person who has written such beautiful words with so much emotions surely will never stop writing…I am jus looking forward to that day when u will resume writing! Let it be five or mre years,but this story will forever remain in ma heart and of course in my library ;)…until then…Love ya and take care :) 

@Clarissa_girl Once in a while someone leaves behind their kind thoughts about the story and it makes me feel I'm back to that time..It has been almost 5 years since I wrote these stories. To be honest, from the day I stopped writing them, I have only yearned to go back to them but something had always held me behind. I had the time, the story in my heart but my pen couldn't bring it to the paper. I was selfish. My feelings and emotions only wanted an answer. And because the answer never came..I couldn't keep the promise. And now, when I feel my pen is ready to write this story again, I wouldn't have the time.. I started my residency last week and I would be occupied by it. I'm sorry that the updates wouldn't come sooner as I planned..also I'm taking this reply to your post as an opportunity to apologise to everyone else too who had looked forward to read the story all this time..All I can say is that..even if I try to cut the ties with this story, like my unrequited love..my heart is connected to it. As long as this heart beats, it will finish this story someday..if not today...Thank you for your emotional words which will be a strength to me..Love you & Take care always, A.