underthebastille

The first two chapters of Ashes to Ashes have been edited and rewritten in the third person. I'm really excited to have this opportunity to go through and change the story slightly. It will give me more ways to attack the unpublished chapters I have up my sleeve. Not much has changed so far. I have no altered anything apart from the tense and how I'm referring to the characters.

underthebastille

The first two chapters of Ashes to Ashes have been edited and rewritten in the third person. I'm really excited to have this opportunity to go through and change the story slightly. It will give me more ways to attack the unpublished chapters I have up my sleeve. Not much has changed so far. I have no altered anything apart from the tense and how I'm referring to the characters.

underthebastille

I'm thinking about going back and rewriting the first 11 chapters of ashes to ashes in the third person so that we can delve into Gavin's perspective a bit more. Plus I find it easier to write fiction in the third person. If you are interested let me know. I don't think the existing chapters will change all that much, however, we will get some of Gavin's thoughts and feelings during the in-person interactions they have. After chapter 11, we will have a bit more of Gavin's perspective when he apart from our lovely Bea.