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Hey :) I'm sorry you probably don't know me but I'm new at writing stories and I see that you like 5sos!
          haha so I was wondering if you could check out my new story (called Resistance) and let me know what you thought? It's okay if you don't, it's just it would mean a lot to me. Thanks for everything 
          -chubbypandaz
          

Hi! Sorry to cause you any trouble I just saw that you liked 5sos! 
          So I was just wondering if you can read my story sometime let me know what you thought of it? It's called Resistance. You definitely don't have to; it would just mean the world to me. Thanks for your time.
          -chubbypandaz