I'm still confused but thats okay (in my reading list?)
And thats good cause I didn't mean offence I was just trying to help, because I know that if I go in a store I won't buy a book unless I semi-understand what it's talking about, oh and if its interesting
You fanned me got to admit I'm not entirely sure why but I'm not going to complain. If you want any suggestions on your story just ask I'll deliver.
Oh and you might want to put a description on your story i find that it helps you focus on where you're going to take the story and helps a reader better understand whats happening.
Sorry know you didn't ask for my opinion hope you don't take offence