underthemoment

✨ New Chapter Drop!
          	
          	It All Started With Him — Chapter 6: Told You Weren’t Ready to Like Me
          	
          	Some friendships end with silence.
          	Some truths hurt more when whispered.
          	And sometimes the boy you can’t stop thinking about climbs out your window with your heart still in his hands.
          	
          	✨ “He told me I wasn’t ready to like him. Maybe he was right. Maybe I was already too far gone.” ✨
          	
          	 Chapter 6 is now live — come read, come feel.
          	 #YAfiction #QueerYA #Wattpad

underthemoment

✨ New Chapter Drop!
          
          It All Started With Him — Chapter 6: Told You Weren’t Ready to Like Me
          
          Some friendships end with silence.
          Some truths hurt more when whispered.
          And sometimes the boy you can’t stop thinking about climbs out your window with your heart still in his hands.
          
          ✨ “He told me I wasn’t ready to like him. Maybe he was right. Maybe I was already too far gone.” ✨
          
           Chapter 6 is now live — come read, come feel.
           #YAfiction #QueerYA #Wattpad

thornearth_community

Heyy sorry if its a bother!
          
          WISTERIA WALTZ —
                               Ꮺ A Magical Cover Contest ✿
          ⌞ where stories bloom and covers carry their weight ⌝
          
          ⋆。゚☁︎。⋆ Each round, the story unfolds.
          ⋆ Your cover becomes the next page. ᭡
          
           Receive enchanted prompts ◗
           Design your vision ◗
           Survive the round ◗
          and shape the tale that grows from root to wisteria bloom. 
          
          But beware . . .
          With each turn of the waltz, the stakes rise.
          Only the bold will dance to the end.
          
          ✧ Are you ready to create, heal, and bloom again?
          Enter the Waltz. The Wisteria awaits.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/396314886?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=thornearth_community

hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

underthemoment

No worries. I definitely appreciate any critiques you have to offer.  My story has a lot of errors throughout.  
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