hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

underthemoment

No worries. I definitely appreciate any critiques you have to offer.  My story has a lot of errors throughout.  
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underthemoment

I haven’t done a book shout out in a while but this one deserves a shout out. I don’t get into books that scream “finish me until the end” and with four chapters deep, this book already screams that. ❤️❤️❤️ This hidden gem is going to make it to the top shelf of Wattpad someday!! 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/372971163?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=postToProfile&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=underthemoment

underthemoment

You’re quite welcome  I’m happy to hear it made your day too ❤️❤️ 
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Wingsandpens

❤️❤️❤️
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Wingsandpens

Thank you so so much, this means the world to me. THIS MADE MY ENTIRE DAY, I CAN’T EVEN BEGIN TO DESCRIBE YOUR WONDERFUL BOOK IT GOT ME REALLY HOOKED AND I WILL SHOUT OUT YOURS TOO
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