Hi, I haven’t looked at my stories in a while so I went back and did a bit of work on Storm specifically; mainly continuity errors, typos and sentence structure. I also added a bit more tension and physical consequence to the scene where Austin grabs Robin (meaning he actually hurts her in the process), to really emphasize that as nice as he can be, Austin’s willing to do anything to keep Robin from leaving that first day, even if it goes against his own morals. This also means Robin’s attitude shift toward him is more gradual and is completed a bit later in the story. Thought you’d be interested, no need to check it out if you’ve already read it and thank you if you have! x
TL;DR: Fixed up Storm a bit so it’s a smoother story