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!Warning: It may require edits in the first story (change where Y/N lives to farther away from Tommy, possibly near Tubbo, possibly near George, your choice. If you do near George, make sure to include the fact Y/N was in the flight with George, and not Tommy. Maybe make the snacks scene when they're alone in the house while George goes to pick up everyone else or something? IDRK, tbh. And with Tubbo, make sure Y/N's on the train ride with him.)! Now, in response to you asking me about the sequel, I believe it would just be best to continue the trip! make it go on, then end it, and create long-distance problems and stuff. Then, eventually have the reader move towards Tommy close by. That could be the ending, or you could go from there. Your choice. If you need anything, contact me, and I'll reach back to you!
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Also, sorry for the late reply. I was going to tell you this morning, but I forgot. Oops!
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Maybe, since it's a sequel, keep it happy, unless you want a trilogy. The only problem with that is you'd have to restructure the entire plot and story across the 3 books, and maybe even rewrite the first, so unless you have the time and dedication to do a well-written trilogy, I would keep the ending happy. Maybe do something like where Y/N gets sad about long-distance and does something about it (If you're ok with it, I'd suggest writing self-harm, I think that would add more to the plotline as a whole). I have more ideas, but I need to know how to write them out so you understand them XD! I'll tell you when I can write them.
unicornblimey
yes!!! defo carrying on with the trip & long distance so such a good idea kinda sad but do you think happy ending or sad ending ? :)))