Idk

Can someone read the first chapter of one of my story’s? I need someone opinion about one of them and I need someone to give me tips, please be nice about it I’m trying 

Hey love, I was wondering if maybe you could check out my friend’s story? It’s a smutty forbidden dark romance book with a bodyguard, good girl + bad guy trope, slow burn, grumpy x sunshine. Thank you for supporting my friend if you chose to do so! :) https://www.wattpad.com/1287710871-tainted-hearts-disclaimer

They got so butthurt about being shitty at starting a book that they blocked me