Natasha755718

Hey there!!
          Sorry for spamming here.
          My friend is a new writer and she needs your support.
          Check out this book and do support my friend.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/389883583?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=library&wp_uname=peace210407

rathirr

Hey, you ok ?

rathirr

@unofficial_silence_ oh!! Then you should focus on your study, and don't worry about me. I mean I'm not exaggerating but I'm quite good at study I'm a topper and I never fail. :-)
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unofficial_silence_

@rathirr okayy. My exam will be in march. It's actually my supply exam. So you should study well and not get any supply
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rathirr

Thanks for your votes on Mafia Girl.
          :-)

rathirr

Hey, thank you very much for following me.
          I hope you like my stories.
          Always be happy :-)

rathirr

@unofficial_silence_ the storyline is really interesting I'm curious to know what gonna happen next...
            
            And I'm also a new author so I can't really give a good feedback but I think you can tag more things that are in your story and also in description you can add something eye catching maybe something about the main protagonist (Hero) and maybe you can add a chapter talking about characters of your story so it would be easy to understand the character. Like about Alexander, Alexia, and other important characters.
            I'm sorry if my feedback is not helpfull but I really like the storyline curious about the main character's entry :-)
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