unsh30

Well , I love the world magical... It's just a thought, I had to put it down somewhere ... so ....hehe

unsh30

When I just began to understand emotions and fellings, I fell in love with a very good ,kind man. Someone with high moral and ethics.  He was someone who was empathetic  and sincere in every imaginable way . He adored me ,worshipped the ground I walked on.
          since then I believed that men were good that men were like him. That's not true .I used think he was ethereal which I missed to realise is that he is nearly unreal too!  He was just an extraordinary exception, I was fortunate enough to encounter.  I was lucky to be loved by someone Like him.
          But there is no way men are like him....You can look around and tell for yourself that those creatures are barely human....who treats women like they are things not living beings 
          In reality men are cruel. 
          

unsh30

I met him after one years last monday at a station, the winds was blowing 
          and this time we talked even..
          .I'm still not over it.
          and I finally realised why people want to marry the person they love . 
          the way you feel after looking at that face..... actually that is all you need after a tiring day. 
          That face can revive your soul. 
          I'm  not even joking. 
          Im so in love dude,even after seven years.....
          
          
          
          I had to wrote it somewhere because I can't tell my bestfrind this!!!! She will kill me!!!! I can't wrote it on paper either because 'fear of getting caught'.... so yeah ranting here

Atifsvocalchords

Warning: Long ass message incoming.
          I am not very fond of reading cricketer bl because well... I will be honest, they are terribly written. I am not homophobic but goddammit if I am not terrible writing phobic. I can put up with grammar and punctuation errors, but to read what's just genuine garbage content pisses me off.
          You may call me stupid for this or whatever, but I would imagine, if you are writing FANFICTION; you may want to get the resemblance close atleast?? Write something that is believably "in-character". People here turn grown men into wimps. And to be very honest, this entire top-bottom thing has turned into assigning heterosexual roles to a homosexual couple and if you have been around the community, you know this pisses people off. Top-bottom exists but god, it doesn't CHANGE people's personality. Virat Kohli sure as hell isn't a fkn baby who needs to be protected. It has turned into a weird highschool fetish I swear.
          That being said. Girl. I loveeee your characterization. Honestly, that was why I read the meme book. RD being a savage cutie: VERY TRUE. Sourav having beef with most people: VERY VERY TRUE. Mahi being absolutely unhinged: I cannot even describe to you how happy that made me. I don't know why people here turn him into a paragorn of maturity and seriousness. Always the one with the calm sensible dialogues. Guys. He is very mature and very crazy at once. That is his charm. Come on, everyone has said that once he begins teasing, he will not stop until you whine at him. That youngest sibling sense of humor. And Rahul is absolutely not as boring as people write him to be. He is extremely talkative once you are close enough and you are talking about something HE likes. So all those paras in the GK interview thing you wrote? VERY VERY incharacter.

unsh30

@Atifsvocalchords yeah I really wish to do better someday:). thanks for the support ,you really make me so happy ♡
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unsh30

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@Atifsvocalchords hey It's really means alot buddy . All thr things you mention is true . Most of the time I also gag reading those shit pieces.  I was actually scared that if I was going on the same path... you massesge put me at peace, truly.  Love you buddy♡
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Atifsvocalchords

But the most pleasant surprise was how in character even GK was XD. I could HEAR him I swear. Literally. Awesome job. I know you write on phone (phones make the paragraphs stick to each other, it is annoying if you are someone like me who needs to clean up her work) and honestly, good characterization makes you skip the grammar errors. So kudos.
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