Warning: Long ass message incoming.
I am not very fond of reading cricketer bl because well... I will be honest, they are terribly written. I am not homophobic but goddammit if I am not terrible writing phobic. I can put up with grammar and punctuation errors, but to read what's just genuine garbage content pisses me off.
You may call me stupid for this or whatever, but I would imagine, if you are writing FANFICTION; you may want to get the resemblance close atleast?? Write something that is believably "in-character". People here turn grown men into wimps. And to be very honest, this entire top-bottom thing has turned into assigning heterosexual roles to a homosexual couple and if you have been around the community, you know this pisses people off. Top-bottom exists but god, it doesn't CHANGE people's personality. Virat Kohli sure as hell isn't a fkn baby who needs to be protected. It has turned into a weird highschool fetish I swear.
That being said. Girl. I loveeee your characterization. Honestly, that was why I read the meme book. RD being a savage cutie: VERY TRUE. Sourav having beef with most people: VERY VERY TRUE. Mahi being absolutely unhinged: I cannot even describe to you how happy that made me. I don't know why people here turn him into a paragorn of maturity and seriousness. Always the one with the calm sensible dialogues. Guys. He is very mature and very crazy at once. That is his charm. Come on, everyone has said that once he begins teasing, he will not stop until you whine at him. That youngest sibling sense of humor. And Rahul is absolutely not as boring as people write him to be. He is extremely talkative once you are close enough and you are talking about something HE likes. So all those paras in the GK interview thing you wrote? VERY VERY incharacter.