urieltom

Sanaa_pseudonym

Sorry for bothering you but are you up for R4R

urieltom

@Sanaa_pseudonym i saw u have put my novel "No Man With The Mask" in your to read list. I wrote that one when i was younger so there are a lot of stuff there i would loved to rewrite, if you don't mind i would recommend you to read my newest book "Sif and the holy grail" its much shorter as well and i believe better written.
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hjyi04

Hi! I have particular R4R style but it's totally up to you because I'm not sure how well received my comments would be. I kind of list my comments throughout the chapter with both critiques (but you can definitely take it however you will because it's your story) and compliments. If you don't want the critique's then you can let me know and I'll delete them. Thanks!

urieltom

@hjyi04 i just finished ur book playing with fire, at least what's out for now. Sorry i didnt read it earlier i was busy. Hope you enjoy Sif and the holy grail!
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urieltom

@hjyi04 sure i love critiques, ill read something from you too
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