Aislingtory

Hi, I wanted to tell you something (since there are no private messages, duh).
          
          Could you give me a little feedback on the timebomb story you mentioned earlier?
          
          It's because I want to get a different perspective on how the story is progressing. I mean, if you find it decent or entertaining. And above all, is the structural change annoying? Sometimes, due to time, the structure isn't completely uniform with the rest of the chapters, and I'd like to know if it's really that noticeable. I want to pay more attention to it if necessary.
          
          Thanks for following the story.

Aislingtory

@urleftpinkytoes I'm sorry for the late reply too! I wasn't notified of this message at all.
            
            Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep it in mind. I also want to maintain a continuous flow in the story, at least for several chapters, without breaks. I'll also try to be more "clean" or organized in the structure of the text.
            
            Whenever you have a complaint, opinion, or observation about the story, please let me know!
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urleftpinkytoes

Hi sorry I’m replying late but I think the story’s going great I love how you wrote it but personally I found the last chapter kind of rushed unlike the other chapters other than that the story is going good so far
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