@authorbysudden Your book really tells abt what happens in today's world concerning rape etc, in 1 chapter, you made your lead male strong when he said whoever did this will pay and then in your next chapter you have him siding with his grandmother forgetting his wife's pain and what she's going through. In real life that is the thing that makes a lot of female commit suicide, because they don't have the backing of someone to be there for them, I think you need to rewrite your male to stand by her and give the punishment for the wrong that has been done without caring abt family legacy, and to stand with his wife and be her safe space. That's just my take on everything.